My main Sue hunters

[pan2000]

Would love to point out: These aren't OCs.

Leah Clearwater is my female lead.

In her canon she was abused verbally a lot and had no friends, all because she didn't believe supernatural bonds are true love. She hates abusers and abusive relationships, especially if they are supernatural and overwrite free will. In my crossover verse, she was bitter until she met Finn, who treated her as a person and, despite her protests, still risked his life and saved her from Aro and the Volturi twice (she repaid the favor during that fight). She slowly developed a crush on him and teases him sometimes, but mostly wants him to be happy. She also cares a lot about humans and werewolves, but hates vampires and demons.

She is a werewolf, used to be the fastest in the pack before they were wiped out for child molestation. Her speed is supernatural even for her species, while she has the normal strength of a werewolf. Weak to silver, very experienced against vampires. She started unarmed before earning a wooden stake for vamps and a steel pipe for unusual enemies.

"Willingness to commit suicide because your significant other left you is not a sign of strength. It's a sign of weakness."

Finn is my male lead.

In his canon, he did have friends, but his past was awful and he got treated like dirt a lot without deserving it (getting sexually assaulted for trying to save everyone else? Seriously, karma?), he only wanted to help others. He still wants to protect every single innocent, though he hates abusive officers and monsters who pretend to be victims. In my crossover verse, he teleported on Earth after a failed experiment and met Leah. He helped her because he thought of all the innocents she would save. He treats Leah as a very good friend, but still loves Rey. He also wants Leah to be happy and would still give his life for her.

He has a lot of training, used to be the best shot in his class before he defected. He is still one of the best shots in the Multiverse, though not as quick as other people. He has no supernatural strength or speed, but he is still quite strong and extremely durable. He can use the Force, but he needs practice to be a Jedi. He also is good with a saber and very skilled against enemy gunmen and machines.

"Screw the rules, I am doing what's right!"

Good choices?

Comments

[ki_no_shirayuki]

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[pan2000]

Is it bad that I ship them because they deserve better than their canons?

[ki_no_shirayuki]

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[pan2000]

Might have them hang out with Shawn from VA (the blond omnivore boy) and that sister of Nobukinz...

Bc why only kill those who provoke the fucked-up morality of stories when you can save the victims too?

[ki_no_shirayuki]

Good idea 🍰

[pan2000]

And I have also a good villain who uses Sues. Amusingly, he never fought Finn or Leah yet.

[ki_no_shirayuki]

Can't wait to see how that turns out ^^

[pan2000]

I have his profile updated, along with Ganondorf's. If you are interested. I might also write the fight between Finn and Leah vs Revisionists.

[ki_no_shirayuki]

That reminds me, I just updated one of my OC fics and… what do you think?

[pan2000]

I remember I commented it is nice.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/17680151

Btw, this fic is the one with the sporking, the Sues who get punished, and its value otherwise is the many, many battle scenes. In the end, there is a fight between Big F and Big G, and it takes four chapters! (The reasons I rarely use these two forms they use at this fight are 1. They aren't canon and 2. They are a bit OP, and in-universe 3. The good guy can't use it at will and the bad guy is too arrogant to use it all the time, plus he wants to surprise tough enemies.)

[ki_no_shirayuki]

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[pan2000]

Finished my edits! After you check my spork, there is a very nice surprise for you in Chapter 30!

[ki_no_shirayuki]

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[bluesamurai]

Man, Leah would Looove Leman Russ!

[pan2000]

Who is he?

Oh, got it! Saw him and he would also be a good match for her. Looks badass. And he would rip Jacob apart.

The reason I make Finn and Leah a team is that... (Drumroll) they both deserved better than what canon gave them!

[bluesamurai]

Oh, makes sense why she, and Finn would. Make a good couple.


And Leman would totally rip Jacob apart! Not even using any of his weapons; just with his bare hands! Even while drunk. (Which, admittedly is most of the time. He’s a Viking werewolf what do you expect?)


Though if Russ, and Leah got together it would make for the most awkward,”meet the family.” Moments. On both sides.

(Though them being together would pose a question, would Leah Technically become the Space Wolves Stepmom?)

[pan2000]

Maybe she would. In my series, she becomes the Alpha of her own pack though, and never, ever uses the Alpha Order...

Vikings can kick ass even drunk. And also Russ doesn't look like the type who runs from fights, so I do believe it will be that easy to beat Jacob. Heck, after the promotion to General, Finn became capable of beating Jacob too! (Have a fic where he... Uhm, "fights" Bella. In this journal.) So, Russ would have an easy time.

Also, Russ: so, how is your pack?
Leah: What pack?

[bluesamurai]

Hahaha ha!

It’ll be even better when she meets all 3000 of her stepsons! (Most of them were not originally related to Leman; they went through Genetic splicing where his Gene seed was implemented in Them when they were 18; after they went through numerous trials to prove themselves worthy. It’s kind of like military training.)


And her Brothers-in-law in Law! Well, the ones that aren’t dead, or currently Deamons serving malicious Chaos Gods. (That is a very, very long story!)


Ooh ooh ohh! Maybe Leah, Leman, And Finn are in a polyamorous relationship!

[pan2000]

Nice idea! The only problem was that I learned about Leman only 3 hours ago... So, I couldn't have thought it first!

Leah would probably accept it, she didn't imprint on Finn.

Explains that in this chapter. https://archiveofourown.org/works/22068304/chapters/52963267

The two men are in sci-fi, and started by striving to function as people... They would like each other.

Funnily enough, the enemies are not only Sues, but demons as well!

[bluesamurai]

True, about Finn, and Leman. But it would probably be awkward at first when you consider that Leman is loyal to; what can be considered a version of the Galactic Empire if it was in a Galaxy so messed up that it’s legitimately the best option for humanity. But eh, he’d get over it eventually.


I think they will all make an amazing group. Fighting Mary Sues, and Demons! While also occasionally engaging in... certain activities together occasionally.


What will also be awkward is Leman’s many, many, many nephews! Some of whom (the Blood Angels, And their successor chapters.) are Vampires! (Yes, they are loyal to the Imperium, and they fight for humanity; how they all became vampires is a long story.)

[pan2000]

Finn: Wait... you are working for an Empire?
Leah: And have vampires in your ranks?
Leman: In my galaxy we defend humanity from abominations of Chaos this way. Seeing how this place starts to become almost as corrupt, I and my forces are here to save humanity before extreme measures are needed!
Finn and Leah warm up to him and his forces.

(Note: Don't know plenty from Warhammer, but do know that it's extremely dark, with black and grey morality. In my crossover fanverse, not everything is so grim, unless you count the Underworld. PKH Luna is supposedly the only member of the main villain group who got the boot for extreme cruelty.)

[bluesamurai]

Heh heh, yeah, though the Blood Angels and their successor chapters aren’t anything like Meyerpires!

1. They see Their Vampirism as a flaw, and are surprisingly humble. Because;
2. They have absolutely no control of their thirst; but it’s not all the time. it usually happens during the heat of battle; when they have a tendency to drink the blood of their enemies. But it’s not so uncommon that it happens randomly.


Lol I can’t wait till Finn, and Leah meet the Adeptus Mechanicus.(Because of course the Ad Mechs are there; the Imperial troops have to maintain their tech.)

Finn: Why is that repair droid chanting to that tank while fixing it? Also, why is it wearing red robes?

Random Tech Priest: I am praying to the Machine Spirit of the Land Raider. By the way,sir, I am not sure whether to be insulted that you called me both and ‘It’, and a piece of Tech Heresy, or flattered that you thought I was fully mechanical.
Finn: what do you mean fully mechanical?

Tech Priest:*Pulls back hood to reveal a woman who’s lower jaw was taken off, and the upper jaw was partially replaced with a ventilator, eyes completely replaced with cybernetic ones*

Finn: What, how?!?!? What happened to you?!

Tech Priest: The flesh is weak, the machine is strong.

Leman: Yeah, Forget to tell you about the machine cult...

[pan2000]

Finn (to Tech Priest): So me beating my first major opponent (in my spiteverse, Phasma is far from the last... But saying he doesn't struggle is a lie) could be attributed to my metal spine according to you?

Meanwhile, Leah(to Blood Angels): Wait. You don't sparkle? And you don't even boast about your vampirism? And you defend humans? Nice! Perhaps not all vampires are awful!

[bluesamurai]

*Finn, and the Tech Priest get into a discussion about cybernetics. While Leah is slowly walking towards them until she sees the scene unfold.*


Leman: Leah, meet one of the members of the Adeptus Mechanicus!

BTW; what are Kitty, Nicky, Lily, and the others doing at this time?

[pan2000]

In "We have each other"? Even though they are no longer the protagonists, they do have their scenes. Wait, you saw the entire "Path of a Rebel"?

Kitty and Nicky reunite with Pan and Dex for good, and they... WHEA has them in Chapters 4 and 5.

Lily Adams... Do you know the reason why she is no longer with the other protagonists? She will be relevant again, don't worry...

Also, I do love some fantasy that also has technology!

[bluesamurai]

Just read the ending a few minutes ago; damn, that twist was awesome! Lily is Lilith? That’s pretty cool!


And I’m just gonna pretend that Kitty, and the others have been rescued; and She’s currently debriefing the Astra Millitarum, And Tempestus Scions how to behave in a less Grimdark universe. (Astra Militarum is the Imperial Guard, Tempestus Scion translates to ‘Storm Trooper’.)


Though Finn might not recognize them at first as they have a completely different design; and in Warhammer 40k are elite soldiers who went through the best training the Inpirium has to offer. (Without living on a Deathworld That is.) Imperial Guardsmen actuality fill the role of SWs Stormtroopers.

They also have a completely different design; here is a WH40k Stormtrooper:https://warhammer40k.fandom.com/wiki/Tempestus_Scions

Here is an article on the Imperial Guard:https://warhammer40k.fandom.com/wiki/Imperial_Army?mobile-app=false

They are badass in their own way; they are all normal humans.

The guy in the Officer uniform is a Commisar. They keep the morale up by shooting any soldiers stupid enough to flee before they tell them to retreat . They also give out orders. Kitty is probably debriefing them first telling them, Not to do the shooting thing!

[pan2000]

Kitty and co did escape after all, so you aren't that off! Right now, they are still doing missions.

Yes, Lily Adams is actually Lilith, and one of the Dragmires.

Checked the troops you showed me, they look badass! And I like the names of the ranks!

Also, something tells me the Imperium would oppose the Dark One... said deity feeds from anything Dark, and I mean anything. He also can control the Darkness inside people. Even his weaker minions fear him.

(In my crossover verse, he also had conflict with Snoke, being the greater evil of the two)

Finally, Finn: Are these Stormtroopers volunteers? Or are they slaves?

[bluesamurai]

Well, they are usually kids from military families; so volunteers kind of. I wouldn’t necessarily call them,”Slaves”. But Many of them are orphans of war. Their families were killed in conflicts by Xenos, or Chaos.


We will have to tell him about the Deathworld Troops eventually; but I want him to meet them for himself.

[pan2000]

It helps that the Imperium is technically the heroic faction, and the First Order is evil, but this says A LOT about the latter, which is in a much lighter verse. Because the FO is much worse, ripping the children from families themselves and making them numbers.

Finn: So, the only orphans you take are orphans because of the enemy, not you, and you basically give them a chance for payback? For darker setting and all, your Empire is better than Palpatine's. Not hard, really.

Leman: Should I be flattered that you find us better, or insulted that you compare us at all? Palpatine was no Emperor, he was a talking animal!

[bluesamurai]

Yeah Finn really shouldn’t compare Palpatine to the God Emperor of Mankind. Dude, that’s Leman’s Dad you’re talking about!


You are also lucky Leman is rather chill. (He is actually surprisingly rather laid back; and loves his brawls, booze, And feasts.) Leman also has a stubborn streak a mile away, and has awful interpersonal skills. (Hence why he didn’t tell his frigging SOS he not only works for an Empire, that has Vampires in its ranks; BUT That He, And His Brothers are The Friggin Sons of Its Emperor!).

BTW here is the God Emperor of Man; his Warhammer Wiki article will explain everything:https://warhammer40k.fandom.com/wiki/Emperor_of_Mankind (Also shows where Leman got his communication skills from; most of what happened could have been avoided had Emps just talked to his Sons!)

[pan2000]

Saw. The Emperor of Mankind is actually closer to King Arthur and not Palpatine. A gray character, heroic for his setting, with divine power and sword, a legend for his men, who has done tragic mistakes though and a corrupt son of his caused his "death". The brackets for both kings.

Also, I am thinking now of adding Leman in the spiteverse where the enemies are Harrymort and Luna Nogood. It's in the comments of PKH 58 onwards. AU to "We have each other", or maybe the other way round. Leman would not enjoy his Blood Angels being called disgusting and especially the werewolf collars and the Slaanesh-like ideology.

Well, the Resistance did ally with dicks like Draco and Kylo Ren just to put Harrymort down, they would accept ANYONE, not just people as worthy as Leman!

[bluesamurai]

Though, the Blood Angels are not *His* per say; hey are his brother Sanguinius’s; who died protecting the Emperor from Horus. He would still be pissed about his nephews being called disgusting. And about the Werewolf collars, and Slaaneshi ideology!

Also, he would be disgusted by the “Caucasian Creams”. Thing. The Impirium don’t really see race the same way we do. There is so much diversity on how humans evolved on other worlds that skin color is kinda a non-issue. (Say what you will about them at least they are tolerant in that regard!). Especially considering his brother Vulkan is literally the darkest guy ever ; also the friendliest guy you’ll meet! And his dad is of middle eastern decent, and his brother Jaghatai Khan is Space Mongolian! Yeah Harrymort you are incredibly lucky that Leman is the only one of the Primarchs still alive that took notice.


Can’t wait for a Harrymort getting a beating from a Primarch!

[pan2000]

Actually, Harrymort finds a way to disgust EVERYONE. And if you think about it, he isn't that tough to beat.

If you check my spitefics for PKH, already in Chapter 4 he gets his first good beating... he gloats that he won the fight though.

The Emperor of Mankind, despite his title, would probably execute Adolf Hitler then, and probably order public humiliation beforehand. Harrymort... would have no problem with Hitler, and of course shout that he does have.

Finally, PKH new chapter out in Das_Sporking... and Leman enters the spitefic with a bang!

Now I imagine Harrymort pretending that he is the God-Emperor of Mankind... well, not OOC for him.

All the warriors of the Imperium: "The heathen!" They all beat the crap out of him. In the end, Harrymort became a measly bloodstain.

Also, I made a Sue Profile of Harrymort... I hope it does make you want to kill him even more!