Its name is "Eyes of a Warrior" and will have some new threats. (And a few old ones)

After Stormwolf and Rey got in many troubles, they think they can get a moment of peace. However, Zant is not going to give them a break as he was preparing to strike at the right time.

Lord Zant is not the only threat. I will reveal two more enemies:

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Power: 8/10
Influence: 10/10
Vileness: 11/10

I had done Harrymort in the distant past. He was an irredeemable piece of shit and an insult to canon Harry. Anyone who thinks making women brainwashed sex slaves is ok needs help. Well, here is the second biggest Sue in the story, who is actually even MORE evil than him!

The Influence parameter is extremely high because she somehow is related to every fairy tale character ever and her influence extends to Alice of Wonderland, allowing her to make Harrymort overpowered and nuke some Muslims. She is also related to Wendy from Peter Pan, the Malfoys, and even Mother Gothel who is whitewashed because the author is an incel.

Her backstory has so many plot holes you could paint it yellow, give it an annoying laugh and call it SpongeBob. She also makes rants similar to the main Stu's, and she is always supposed to be in the right. When Harrymort tortures the Dursleys to the point you forget they were abusive and want to end their suffering, he shows a glimpse of regret. Of being Harry. Luna, showing an impressive display of morality, points out forcing three Muggles to eat each other for eternity because they neglected an innocent child related to them was the right thing to do.

But no, no, that's not the worst thing. I am not a fan of Lucius and Draco, but what will follow disgusted me. Luna murders Lucius to steal his vast fortune. Draco wants revenge and attempts to kill her. Justified. She plays the victim and makes him subjected to forced sex change and impregnation that will last many many years, and also blackmails his mom to comply. And she thinks this is not a harsh punishment. Did I mention Draco is underage? Luna Nogood doesn't care. She also suggested naked wrestling with other children earlier.

Bully or not, YOU DON'T GET A CHILD RAPED REPEATEDLY, ASSHOLE!

In TV Tropes we couldn't classify her as a complete monster because we are supposed to root for her.

From fighting skills, she is submissive to Harrymort and makes everyone else be too, and she also has the powers of a fairy, a Nemean Lion and a unicorn, because she is totally pure of heart amirite?

She appears in the spitefic "Unholy Alliance" as one of the main villains, being the turncoat Black Legion member Moon Maiden. Who had been given the boot by the Dark One because she was too vile for the standards of a deity who keeps the likes of Alastor and binds the souls of innocent women and their abusers forcibly. Specifically, the Dark One punished pedophiles with execution and the Maiden wanted to kill him and take his place... But she wasn't strong enough to do so directly.

So, she allied herself with the Fairy Queen and Harrymort. The former was willing to do anything, ANYTHING to repopulate her race, while the latter wanted an immortal harem of brainwashed slaves to adore him. The Dryads would breed more Fae, so the three combined their evil agendas. She was actually manipulating both of her allies so she could overthrow her archenemy, and made a confusing story for her origins as a cover-up.

She chastises everyone in her side for being weak when they show empathy and, when Finn breaks the cauldron that made the women immortal breeding machines, the Moon Maiden proposes to the Fairy Queen to take him as her own personal breeder to repopulate her race. She is slain when Zant, the Dark One's right-hand man, duels with her to the death after exposing her treachery. Good riddance.
Power: 1/10
Influence: 11/10 (seriously, the entire world and even main Sues revolve around her once she is born)
Vileness: 5/10 (how bad can a spoiled brat truly be?)

Since she is a baby, she didn't manage to be directly responsible for a lot of evil, and whatever bad thing she does is probably from spoiling and delusions. Though she did nearly destroy the world and Physics by making an eight-pointed snowflake to feel special.

What makes her irritating is that the world apparently revolves around her. Even the outrageous Sues who are in the story act like her satelites, the final battle which would almost happen would be because of her...

Since she mostly exists and is worshipped for existing and doesn't do much, I will immediately go to what she does in my spiteverse.

She was being spoiled as usual... until she lost everything. First her lover, who fell for her since she was born (that got him executed), and then her parents by a mix of their codependency and underestimating Homo Sapiens.

She isn't a warrior, so she can't just fight anyone who can hurt her even a little openly. Her power is telepathy, which basically is good for giving orders. So, she has put a bounty to Finn and Leah and sends others to do the work for her.

Would you like to see her as a minor antagonist?
Dio, one of the most iconic and dangerous anime villains. With a plethora of vampire powers, as well as a Stand that punches hard and stops time, he is a formidable foe...

Even some Sues, despite having a lot of stuff handed to them, would fall before his might!

Below are some examples! (No order)

1. Edward Cullen. He might be hated, but he is not weak. He doesn't burn in the Sun, unlike Dio, and is a competent vampire. He also reads minds and can predict every single move of the enemy... Why would he still lose? Dio can stop time. So Edward would be aware how he is going to get hit, but he will be unable to stop it. Time stop is the one thing a mind reader fears.

2. Morgaine from Avalon. While Brando was practicing Ionic Freeze and time stop, she was practicing love potions. Dio stomps.

3. Takara from Daimyo's Grandchild. She is nothing but a petty bully who thinks she is a Chosen One. She is talented with bare hands and a gangster, but she is beneath superpowers. Plus, Dio has evolved beyond petty bully years ago.

4. Nobukinz. He is here for being an anime character. However, he is nowhere near Nobunaga and Dio would not need Za Warudo to win. Just knives or the Ionic Freeze. Bringing sex slaves from the past is not useful in a fight.

5. Ariana Black. She can sense the feelings of others and would probably be overwhelmed by Dio's malice and spite. Being an Empath would be useful, and she could try to redeem this vampire, but does it protect against freezing of blood cells, eye lasers and knives? Oh yeah, and that dreaded time stop.

However, there are Sues who could beat him. I am sure only about one. Rebora, who could just fill the entire city with light and kill him before he even finds her and stops time!
Sometimes, I am inspired by bad writers, and not just to mock them. Examples include the "evil bonds that condone abuse", only I actually portray them as evil, and having some underused characters in bigger roles.

Today, let's speak about ways PLH inspired me. All ironic, of course. Coincidences like the Malebranche/Dryads do not count.

1. It made me limit the character-bashing. I started with some of it, but tried my best to limit it later. Though Lionheart did inspire me even more.

2. In my stories there is now a propaganda piece where the evil government portrays Finn the way Darth Dumbledore is portrayed. As a mustache-twirling villain, ineffective in practice.

3. It made me buff vampires. I didn't make impressive ones until then, though this was partially because they were mostly... Aro and Bella. Yeah, not so threatening. However, I saw the vampires of PKH, who were actually weaker than humans (and despite the rants about Twilight, replacing the vampires with dryads changes nothing), and wondered if my vampires are also too weak. So, I introduced the Vampiric Infantry, who replace the arrogance with experience and training and are fairly competent.

4. Their leader, Armilla, deserves a separate mention. She is the exact type of villain Lionheart would not write ever. She is an attractive vampire woman, and does not get whitewashed in spite of her attractiveness. Despite that, she does show some standards, especially when it comes to private matters. She is also very effective, defeats the male lead in her first appearance and the female lead is the one who puts her down... and there are some more details that basically would be very out of place for a PLH villain. She is also a minion of a minion, btw.

5. Two of Kylo's Redemption Tasks in the Forgiveness Timeline have to do with PKH. They can be found in das_sporking.

Though other Sues get on my sights too. I.e. in the Stormwolf Timeline, Takara will be a major enemy in the Japanese arc. Abusive little shits don't get away easily. And I once used Nobunaga-Sensei as a torture device.

Maybe I will make one for Ian's abomination or Vegan Fartbook later. These two also ironically inspired me and are liquid shit.

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