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Twisted Seventh Sister Review
This blog, before Jojo, death battles and self-promotion, started as one with reviews, negative and positive. Mostly negative. I haven't read a lot of bad Star Wars fanfic. I love Star Wars (when it does not romanticise abuse) and prefer to read good fics.
Well, this one does not have a Sue. It also has pretty good prose, and is actually pretty scary. In fact, it might be the scariest fic that probably did it on purpose. It also has femdom, which... well, I have no problem with. Plus, the characters are IC to a degree.
So, what's the problem with this fic? No, not the bad grammar. No, worse.
It sexualizes a male teenager being brutally, and I do mean brutally, raped by an adult woman.
In fact, when poor Ezra Bridger gets kissed against his will, he immediately thinks "she is beautiful." No, I don't remember how the typo in the sentence was and don't give a shit.
The Fifth Brother seems to have standards, saying a hunter does not disgrace himself by toying with his prey. And the fic did portray emotion right, and Seventh did give the vibes in canon, but rape written well will not improve it.
Fun fact: I read this when I was Ezra's age in Rebels Season 2.
Let's say that we both lost something there. Something we could never get back.
Our innocence.
Rate: Ignoring the moral bankruptcy: 7/10
Not ignoring it: 1/10, the highest I could put for something so deparved.
Well, this one does not have a Sue. It also has pretty good prose, and is actually pretty scary. In fact, it might be the scariest fic that probably did it on purpose. It also has femdom, which... well, I have no problem with. Plus, the characters are IC to a degree.
So, what's the problem with this fic? No, not the bad grammar. No, worse.
It sexualizes a male teenager being brutally, and I do mean brutally, raped by an adult woman.
In fact, when poor Ezra Bridger gets kissed against his will, he immediately thinks "she is beautiful." No, I don't remember how the typo in the sentence was and don't give a shit.
The Fifth Brother seems to have standards, saying a hunter does not disgrace himself by toying with his prey. And the fic did portray emotion right, and Seventh did give the vibes in canon, but rape written well will not improve it.
Fun fact: I read this when I was Ezra's age in Rebels Season 2.
Let's say that we both lost something there. Something we could never get back.
Our innocence.
Rate: Ignoring the moral bankruptcy: 7/10
Not ignoring it: 1/10, the highest I could put for something so deparved.